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A Winter's Morning
#WINTER#DAWN#SUNRISE#TREES#MORNING#LIGHT
Penny Myles PRO
1 year ago

Hi. I would really appreciate some critique on this image of a winter sunrise.  There was snow on the ground and the light was superb. I havent managed to catch the light but I just wondered if the photo was too mundane or whether I could improve the processing in any way. I have already tindered with it a tiny bit in NiK's color efex. Any comments would be gratefully received.

 

Udo Dittmann PRO
1 year ago

Hello Penny,

 

very difficult shot against the sun ...

 

I've tried a few things, but I haven't come up with an acceptable solution because the colors quickly break off during editing and bright artifacts form - the dynamic range is simply not high enough for deep editing - at least for me.

I can only recommend that you go back to RAW development, as it's probably easier to improve things there.

And I would crop the image differently - you can see here:

 



 

Greetings

Udo

Elizabeth Allen CREW 
1 year ago — Senior critic

Hello Penny

 

Thank you for sharing this beautiful, atmospheric photo with us. I love shooting trees in fog myself. I have enhanced your photo a little in terms of colour, light and definition. You might want to crop the left side a little to remove the branches on the edge and then perhaps the top edge, although Udo has given you some advice too.

Good light, Elizabeth

 

Penny Myles PRO
1 year ago

Thank you very much for your time and comments Udo and Elizabeth. I will go back to the drawing board

Cicek Kiral CREW 
1 year ago — Senior critic

Hello, Penny

Welcome to our forum. I like images like this one. I would like to share some insights on it. The atmosphere is good. I like the mood. Then there are a few things to mention. First, let's talk about the sun. The winter sun to me looks quite too bright and harsh compared to the whole of the image. I would advice to try to increase the contrast of the Image except the sun. There might be a couple of ways to do this. You might use Photoshop and camera raw for example. You could to this with adding masks and subtracting them. I would select the sun and then invest the selection. Then you could either use dehase plus ten or you can increase the contrast. You should be subtle while doing this. I think your image needs balance in terms of the bright and muted areas. The trees look to insignificant. They could be defined a bit more. I wish you good light. Cicek...

 

Penny Myles PRO
1 year ago

Thank you so much Cicek - thats very helpful